In future I would focus on the story first and learning how to put my thoughts into words. As I had big ideas but didn’t know how to put them into a software which I have never used before. I could of also worked on my English confidence this is because due to me having low English skills I was worried about Spag and typos and therefore, tried to lower the amount of words used. Due to me doing this I lowered it to an extent where it didn’t feel like a story to me but instead of a multiple choice mini game. I also should have stuck with a liner format this is because I struggled creating the multiple choices that the player had but wanted to achieve multiple choices as to me a liner story would have been too boaring.

Personally I really struggled with this unit and making sure I maintained any English skills such as structuring and wording. I was also didn’t full understand the software I’d be using. However, I would like to work on my story telling in the future. Therefore, I had to ask for external help with my wording to get it as good as it is.

I would also do my plan better this is because just having bones of what I wanted to create didn’t help that much and should of been more in depth to what I wanted to create. Due to this I think that I missed my narrative theories that I wanted to include.

However, I do think that I managed to get a greater understanding on how story telling is and how it can be used in multiple different ways. This was a nice learning experience as I know where I went wrong and how I would improve next time. I would also change the software used into something that I would of been able to understand more with software such as PowerPoint I would of also changed my work flow as I started with the design first and not the story itself. This was a huge mistake and was a great learning experience to teach me that planning can in my ways.

Based on my feedback I can see that the people agreed with the points I made above and therefore, I will work on that in the future. On which tasks are more important.